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School Meals MSG Ingredient Veagans vs No Vegean What types of oil is concidered healthy What types of chemicals can be added to foods Research Topic : PETA - People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals Midterm is going to be on adding toys to food meals to add the actraction ex Mcdonalds Happy Meals

          Afer reading all the opinions of the food stamps regulation and soda taxation i had to agree with the Good Nutrition on a Budget by Caryn Sweeney . I agreed to her explanation because it made more sense. The reason people dont eat healthy food is not mainly because they don't have too much money to spend but its because they is not much time for people to cook a home meal......

After reading Fast Food Nation "Your Trusted Friends" which talks about how McDonalds became the big franchise that it is now. It goes to talk about how Ray Croc and Waltz Disney’s where so similar in that they came from the same state Illinois, both were part of WWI.             It also goes into detail of how they get kids to be customers “Kid Kustomers” Different ways of naggings that children practice in order to get what they what. They adding toys to their meals it entices them and in addition to that they also have characters that they listen to them since they are also on TV. All I can say about the big food industry is to continue doing what they have found profiting to them. If us humans care so much of our health we should do something about it and not go around suing companies. After watching “Supersize Me” all I could say was do people really eat McDonalds like the guy in the movie because its ridiculous. Three times a day is too much left alone for 30day

Review Worksheet 1.      Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic? My first paragraph was good but I needed to explain more thus expanding it to be longer than what it really is. 2.      What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement. I identify the thesis in the first sentence of the introduction “I am writing about how the food from the 19 th Century was better than that of the food we eat in the 21 st Century” 3.      Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions? According to the structure its is as introduction