Review Worksheet 1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic? My first paragraph was good but I needed to explain more thus expanding it to be longer than what it really is. 2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement. I identify the thesis in the first sentence of the introduction “I am writing about how the food from the 19 th Century was better than that of the food we eat in the 21 st Century” 3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main con...